Getting there. I'd make "the" smaller (as it's basically a silent "the", everyone presumes it's there) and have it almost as a superscript above the "Seeds", to the left, or all on one line, and you could vertically stretch the text slightly for "Seeds" and "Doom" as they are the key words.
The whole thing is standing out better now. I think the text being only about 10-15% of the design area was a little odd, like the text was shy. It's a book cover after all. Usually the text is massive.
I liked the colour part of the radial stuff - in turqouise. I think you've mixed up what I meant, I was referring to the large segments of solid grey that are currently there. If those were darker, it would work nicer. Because light grey, and green, is a bit of a poor contrast. Green and dark grey - sure (look at YoYo Games website: http://www.yoyogames.com
). But not green and light grey.