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Joer wrote: Can anyone see any obvious improvements I can make to http://www.megsgreencleaning.co.uk

Yeah, the website doesn't work

Really? That's not a good sign! It works fine on my end. What does it do when you try to go on it?

Works fine for me. Looks decent too.

Sweet, cheers Cora.

Joer wrote:Really? That's not a good sign! It works fine on my end. What does it do when you try to go on it?

I did get through to it briefly but mostly I get the message
This site can’t be reached
The connection was reset.
Try:

Checking the connection
ERR_CONNECTION_RESET

Hyperion wrote:

Joer wrote:Really? That's not a good sign! It works fine on my end. What does it do when you try to go on it?

I did get through to it briefly but mostly I get the message
This site can’t be reached
The connection was reset.
Try:

Checking the connection
ERR_CONNECTION_RESET

Have you tried clearing your cache?

Errkal wrote:

Hyperion wrote:

Joer wrote:Really? That's not a good sign! It works fine on my end. What does it do when you try to go on it?

I did get through to it briefly but mostly I get the message
This site can’t be reached
The connection was reset.
Try:

Checking the connection
ERR_CONNECTION_RESET

Have you tried clearing your cache?

Bit of a personal question that, mate

I don't even know why I asked, I wouldn't even know how to fix that.

Ctrl + F5

Not bad overall, its for a cleaning service so using a nice clean interface is a good way to go. One cool touch I thought of would be to have the top bar, the bit that doestn scroll away, shrink when you scroll down, leaving you with just the navigation links and the contact info, just so it doesnt take up quite so much space as you read the rest of the webpage.

Also, a favicon wouldnt go astray, just to make it look a bit nicer in a tabbed browser.

Great stuff, cheers Rax. Now i've Googled what a favicon is, i'll try and work out how to add one!

Joer wrote:Thanks for the help with the logo trouble chaps. I've just made my first website in doing this for my girlfriend and it's instantly turned me into a perfectionist with it now where i'm stressing out about it wanting to improve it all the time. The issue is I have no idea what i'm doing. Can anyone see any obvious improvements I can make to http://www.megsgreencleaning.co.uk - this gooseberry fool is all new to me so i'm trying to learn as I go but being the first time i've designed a site i've probably missed an obvious trick somewhere!

strawberry float off bot.

Joer wrote:Thanks for the help with the logo trouble chaps. I've just made my first website in doing this for my girlfriend and it's instantly turned me into a perfectionist with it now where i'm stressing out about it wanting to improve it all the time. The issue is I have no idea what i'm doing. Can anyone see any obvious improvements I can make to http://www.megsgreencleaning.co.uk - this gooseberry fool is all new to me so i'm trying to learn as I go but being the first time i've designed a site i've probably missed an obvious trick somewhere!

That looks pretty good! I'm no expert on designing websites but just a few very minor points with easy fixes I noticed on the layout and wording:

'Contact Us' under 'Why Choose Us?' looks slightly off-centre

I'd probably add a comma to this sentence - "The products we use do not leave behind any toxic or harmful fumes or residues and are all vegan friendly and gluten free for your home and work spaces."

The quote from Yvette has the big quotation marks at the end but none at at the start

Under the Ironing service on the Pricing section, you've used "I" whereas on the rest of the website you've used "we"

Cleaning products can be gluten free?

Posted from my gluten free samsung s7

Why would it matter if your floor is cleaned with gluten free cleaner?

I was baffled about this too. The gluten free stuff is for the workspaces as apparently if someone has coeliacs disease and there's traces of gluten in the cleaning products it can trigger it.

I only use cleaning products that squirted in the eyes of puppies.

Errkal wrote:Why would it matter if your floor is cleaned with gluten free cleaner?

Lots of people with gluten intolerance like to lick their floors.