kerr9000 wrote:I think it also gets boring if your always going "it's all because of evil corporations" , I think it's good to show that left or right, rich or poor someone can just plain be a dick. The best Villains are usually those who feel that they are the hero of there own story.
I agree with this. I just felt that the lack of genuine threat from the Kerblam corporation created a vacuum in the drama. Sure its a bit of a soulless place to work but other then that.... not like people were forced to work extra hours or given tasks they could never complete in time or threatened to dock pay because they chatted with people. "Great conversation but..."
I think thats why I found it so boring. Just the first half went on and then when it started to kick off I just didn't care. Your just told some people have gone missing and then it turns out the missing people are all due to the stupid kid and the company did nowt wrong but could just be a bit nicer to people.
That and the really lazy and conveniently placed hiding spot. Seriously could they not at least have made it that they hide in something that had a function. And the conveyor belt/laser bits that looked like it had been farmed out to a student on work experience to film. This Doctor again telling someone how she has met someone famous.
Then there are the plot issues that the twist creates....
The Watching Artist wrote:Why did the system send a cryptic help me message rather then explaining the situation?
We also don't know enough about how Keblam works. They must have other locations across the galaxy. A head office somewhere. Why does the system not report this stuff to them? Does this whole workplace on this moon not have any human security? The whole story is a bait and switch which would be fine if it still made sense.