As an entrant I just want to say a massive thanks to A.I. for going to a lot of effort to conduct this contest. Thank you.
I also wanted to say a ultra-massive thanks to everybody who voted and commented, and apologise for not voting as I left it until late and has a very busy week...
BIG congratulations to Poncho & Jazzem for their wins, and a pat on the back for everyone who entered in the spirit of opportunity and adventure.
Hero of Canton made some very accurate observations, and I appreciate the time he put in to give feedback, and yes the piece was originally written for a mainstream newspaper (I got ripped off about a whole videogame concept but that's another story
.) Eighthours thanks for saying
"this is a good review for a mainstream audience" but I understand your sentiment about the 'apostrophe howlers.' Thank you as well Puffin and reactant mob driven.
A.I. thanks again.
Until next time!