Jenu-All I Want For Christmas wrote:no wrote:Jenu-All I Want For Christmas wrote:Whilst I prefer commentary with a bit more patience to it than the usual YT "shove it down your throat constantly!!!" approach, I think you could do with shortening or removing some of the pauses here. Sometimes it just makes it sound like you've forgotten what you were saying - which can work in more conversational videos but I think just needs tightening up a little.
Also not sure if it's something to do with where I am watching it at work but some of the content seems to be cropped out of the view at times - when you stick up some text like the Game/Platform/Release Date etc. this is being cut off at the corner of the screen?
Also some of the text that you flash up to comment/compliment what you are saying sometimes doesn't stay up long enough to read it - there's a bit where you stick something about Mayor Humdinger/the Kitastrophe Crew up but I couldn't read it without pausing.
I enjoyed the video though, you've got a nice relaxed style, gave me some nice insights into the game and coherently shared your views on it.
I actually think my youngest would quite enjoy how easy this is - he seems to struggle with any actual challenge in platformers and this might give him something enjoyable to hone his basic movement skills without worrying about dying too much!
The text in the corner is fine for me. No idea why it's cropped out for you, that's rather odd.
Yeah, I didn't realise how fast that the text is, I'll have to make sure that in future I give the text boxes a little more time.
Thanks for the feedback, dude
Must be something weird about where I'm watching it then!
Did you intend to have this Paw Patrol video as unlisted by the way? Just looking through your channel to see what other "final verdict" videos you have put up for me to have a look at and couldn't see this one?
Yeah, it is intentional. I basically started to do the Monthly videos due to people subbing to the Twitch channel and as they were subbing I decided to give them extra by making the monthly reviews. When asking about feedback people said to make the videos, but instead of them being for subs only make them available to everyone, but subs early, that's what I went with doing for them, but as I decided to drop the monthly vids as the last one was 30 minutes (people may not want to watch a 30-minute video about a few games) and am instead doing Final Verdict (the format is exactly the same, it was just several games in one video instead of separate videos.) Basically I put it up for my subs on discord first, then here (though the last two videos were at the same time) then I have them go public a few days later.
Didn't Know what to call the videos, was tempted to go with the simple 'Pedz's Reviews' but thought I best not be that boring
If you want to see thoughts on more games I did before Final verdict it was Pedz's Month in Review. as I say above it's the same format, just more games at once. Games range from Sonic The Hedgehog to Link's Awakening (Switch)
I think they are all in the thread.
Also, this I did back about 2 years ago I think. It was when I was originally going to start trying to get free keys from publishers and devs and start doing previews and reviews etc.