Got to the end. Thanks DML.
My personal thoughts:
StayDead: My personal favourite here. When I write about Magic Design I'm all about flavour and things feeling as they should, and SD seems to have (from my research) made a game that feels like it's Stein's Gate, if that makes sense. It did take a couple read throughs but I think the actual game it's self is quite clever and unique, with the time travel aspect being a real winner. It needs tweaking (but all these games do), but it's something that if presented to me at a reasonable price, I would most likely be willing to part with my money.
Tragic Magic: This seems like a good idea in theory, but I think the execution is a bit lacking. It seems like it won't lead to balanced gameplay, which is a huge no-no for me. However it plays into the themes of the games excellently and feels a little different to the usual board game offering. Not a big fan of the alarm system, but I do like the idea of having some kind of countdown- perhaps X amount of turns would have worked better?
Elbo/Zeni/Deadpool/Eeveeite/Vapoeron/: This seems like a game you could play quickly and get a good laugh out of. There's not much I can really say about it. It needs some tweaks, but I would happily play it a couple times. That said, it does seem to lack a lot in strategy and some parts of it just seem too "feel-bad". Looking at you, Bullet Bill. Very flavourful though, ticking all the usual Mario Kart boxes.
Dalagonash: I'm in two minds about this. As I'll point out with a few others, I really hate "mini-games" in board-games. It just seems like a huge disconnect from the main aim and I generally find them unfun- singing, etc is the kind of thing I really quite like to avoid. (I mean, board games a re a social thing- and there's a card that requires 5 minutes of silence?) Otherwise a lot of it seems quite muddled and there's maybe too much going on. That said, the base concept is very sound and you've clearly put a lot of work into it, and like others, there's a lot of flavour running through the game.
Delusibeta: Theme Hospital was actually my second choice after Bioshock. I think you've got good basics and a decent foundation to build from, but things are a little confusing at points from my read-through. Also, the biggest problem I think there is, is that Theme Hopsital's main feature was it's humour- and I didn't really find that coming across, as most the funny bits were from the original game. Still, good foundations.
Clarkman: I strawberry floating hate mini-games. That said, it's actually only one of two issues I have, the other being that everything seems too simplistic and for fear of a bad joke, the game lacks spice). Top marks for it actually representing what I imagine a Cooking Mama game being. I think it's easy to get a grasp on, easy to understand with a subtle layer of strategy. I also award tops marks as you've made your own board and such- plus, the flavour boxes get ticked here. Little things like calling the central square "the hob" really makes me smile.
Drumstick: Funnily enough, DML said everything I would have about this. Third time- Mini-Games are bad.
Frank: I like that you've gone for a more obscure game, but again- I really hate mini-games. I just don't really find it all that exciting either, and although I think DML's gone a bit overboard on the dice-roll hate, in this particular game, it's warranted.
Feel like I've really pitched an idea to some big company, it's all very serious. 
DML seems to be quite against them, so I'm dreading what he says about mine now