The Writer's Sphere - Share your writing

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PostRe: The Writer's Sphere - Share your writing
by Meep » Sat May 25, 2019 12:20 pm

I was commenting on the BBC article "Using artificial intelligence, Ideas will suggest rewrites for clunky sentences as well as changes to make sure language is gender inclusive." Which just seemed kind of funny. :lol: I can imagine a lot of people going nuts if that's really the case.

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PostRe: The Writer's Sphere - Share your writing
by shy guy 64 » Sat May 25, 2019 1:10 pm

DarkRula wrote:
shy guy 64 wrote:Frozen Fire


Just to let you know, I've bought it, and will be starting reading soon.

Those second book previews also sound great.


i hoe you enjoy it, id love to hear your thoughts on it if you wouldnt mind

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by DarkRula » Sat May 25, 2019 1:43 pm

I'll be sure to post some thoughts.

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by DarkRula » Mon May 27, 2019 11:45 pm

shy guy 64 wrote:id love to hear your thoughts on it if you wouldnt mind


Having finished The World Within the Web, my initial impressions are that this is definitely a good read. I'm particularly liking Visrel - the arrogant villain who is sure their plans will always work. The Frozen Fire team are starting to grow on me, and there's references aplenty within the building of the characters and the world [such as the races being file types]. While there are punctuation errors and missing words, it's easy to understand what is actually meant.

You've done good with it, and I look forward to reading the rest.

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PostRe: The Writer's Sphere - Share your writing
by shy guy 64 » Tue May 28, 2019 9:35 am

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shy guy 64 wrote:id love to hear your thoughts on it if you wouldnt mind


Having finished The World Within the Web, my initial impressions are that this is definitely a good read. I'm particularly liking Visrel - the arrogant villain who is sure their plans will always work. The Frozen Fire team are starting to grow on me, and there's references aplenty within the building of the characters and the world [such as the races being file types]. While there are punctuation errors and missing words, it's easy to understand what is actually meant.

You've done good with it, and I look forward to reading the rest.


thank you i really appreciate it and im glad you liked it, i think something went wrong in the editing process when we were rounding up the errors

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by DarkRula » Tue May 28, 2019 11:35 am

I've seen plenty of errors in countless ebooks - including a paragraph chopped away from the middle of a chapter and dumped at the end - so I'm used to such things.

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by shy guy 64 » Tue May 28, 2019 12:53 pm

DarkRula wrote:I've seen plenty of errors in countless ebooks - including a paragraph chopped away from the middle of a chapter and dumped at the end - so I'm used to such things.


thats oddly reassuring

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by DarkRula » Tue May 28, 2019 2:20 pm

Only professional reviewers take note of such errors when it comes to the actual content, but if that content is worthy of a read, they'll still recommend it anyway.

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by shy guy 64 » Tue May 28, 2019 3:55 pm

DarkRula wrote:Only professional reviewers take note of such errors when it comes to the actual content, but if that content is worthy of a read, they'll still recommend it anyway.


well i have no professional reviewers yet, ill bare that in mind though

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